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It's the first Wednesday
of the month ~
the day when members of the
Insecure Writer's Support Group
share their writing struggles
and offer their encouragement
and support to other members.
To visit the IWSG website, click here.
To become a member of the IWSG, click here.
Our wonderful co-hosts who are stepping up to help IWSG founder Alex J. Cavanaugh are:
Beverly Stowe McClure , Megan Morgan, Viola Fury, Madeline Mora-Summonte, Angela Wooldridge, and Susan Gourley.
I hope you have a chance to visit them and thank them for co-hosting.
I'm sure they would appreciate an encouraging comment!
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Wow, this IWSG Day arrived quickly!
It finds me happily writing in Victoria.
Certainly Victoria has been the perfect place to draft
a fantasy story for the 2016 IWSG Anthology Contest,
and now I'm working to bring that draft to its final ready state.
The Premier's Rose Garden
Victoria, British Columbia, Canada
© M. Louise (MacBeath) Barbour/Fundy Blue
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Victoria often feels otherworldly to me.
The ubiquitous presence of
water and sky, flowers and art,
and culture and history enchants me.
It's easier to slip into the fantastic here.
So, I took the plunge,
and I'm writing fantasy for the first time in my life.
My tiny suite in Helm's Inn is a perfect place to work.
And October's question for IWSG members is certainly timely:
The ubiquitous presence of
water and sky, flowers and art,
and culture and history enchants me.
It's easier to slip into the fantastic here.
Wawadiťła, The Mungo Martin House
Thunderbird Park
Victoria, British Columbia, Canada
© M. Louise (MacBeath) Barbour/Fundy Blue
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and I'm writing fantasy for the first time in my life.
My tiny suite in Helm's Inn is a perfect place to work.
My Writing Space
Helm's Inn
Victoria, British Columbia, Canada
© M. Louise (MacBeath) Barbour/Fundy Blue
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And October's question for IWSG members is certainly timely:
When do you know your story is ready?
I'm sure I'm not the only IWSG member
working on an entry for the IWSG anthology contest!
And I'm sure I'm not the only member
whose story is definitely NOT ready!
After writing the first draft,
I found myself in a position
I've never experienced before.
Instead of having thousands of words over the total allowed,
I was hundreds of words short of the minimum.
I think that's the result of striving to write succinct blog posts.
Good thing too, because my plot still needs serious work!
Otherworldly Bridge
Johnson Street Bridge
Victoria, British Columbia, Canada
© M. Louise (MacBeath) Barbour/Fundy Blue
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It's strange to be immersed in a dreamlike city
plotting fantasy and trying to make the fantastic seem real.
Surreal Water
with Seagull and Kelp
Ogden Point Breakwater
Victoria, British Columbia, Canada
© M. Louise (MacBeath) Barbour/Fundy Blue
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So how do I know when my story is ready?
It's a simple question, but a difficult one to answer.
There are certain writing elements that guide me when I write fiction.
First, as a writer, I am inspired by setting,
and most stories begin for me with a concrete place.
I think who you are is absolutely a result of where you are.
I think place shapes you and the path you take in life,
so my characters must be grounded in place.
For me, the setting must ring true.
Don't ask me to define that!
It's a feeling of authenticity that my heart hears.
Setting, an Inspiration for Story
Straight of Juan de Fuca
Victoria, British Columbia, Canada
© M. Louise (MacBeath) Barbour/Fundy Blue
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Second, as a writer, I strive to create well-developed characters.
Major or minor, a character has to be rounded,
not flat or stereotypical.
Again, my story is ready when I sense that the characters ring true.
There can't be any discordant vibrations.
Character, Defined by Place and Well-Developed
The Legislative Building
Victoria, British Columbia, Canada
© M. Louise (MacBeath) Barbour/Fundy Blue
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Third, the plot has to be strong and plausible.
Now this is a challenge for me,
because I can get tangled in setting and character.
Relief was my first reaction when learning
I had more words to work with in the anthology contest.
On rereading my first draft,
I realized that fantasy plot of mine needed more conflict ~
Not to mention more clearly-defined motivation
to drive that conflict and improve its plausibility.
So that's where I'm putting those extra words to work.
Plot: Men in suits with wires in their ears
always up the tension and potential for conflict.
The Official Start to the Royal Tour
Victoria, British Columbia, Canada
© M. Louise (MacBeath) Barbour/Fundy Blue
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If I can nail place, character, and plot to my satisfaction,
then I'm into the fun part of getting my story ready:
playing with language!
I'm on a hunt for precise nouns and strong verbs.
I'm rooting out cliches and extra adjectives.
I'm trying to limit alliteration.
I'm slaying the passive voice wherever possible.
I'm building variety with sentence structure.
I'm racking my brain for fresh and original,
even when I despair of finding anything new.
I'm ruthlessly slashing unnecessary words.
I'm listening for dialogue that sounds authentic.
And always I'm hearing the words in my mind,
checking for rhythm and flow.
Language: Reaching for Perfection and Flow
“Red Dragon” by Ping Tsing at the corner of Pandora and Government streets.
Chinatown
Victoria, British Columbia, Canada
© M. Louise (MacBeath) Barbour/Fundy Blue
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Next I check for conventions:
spelling, punctuation, grammar, and useage.
I may not catch everything,
and I'll deliberately break the rules if it suits my purpose;
but generally I am perfection-driven.
If I've done the best I can do with setting, character,
plot, language, and conventions, then I'll sketch an outline
to make sure my piece is organized and connected with transitions.
Then finally I ask myself,
"Does this sound like me? Is this my unique voice?"
If this rings true, then my story is ready!
Voice: Unique and Authentic
This could only be Victoria
with its inner harbour, dancing water taxis, and imposing Coho.
Victoria, British Columbia, Canada
© M. Louise (MacBeath) Barbour/Fundy Blue
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No wonder it takes me a long time to write! ~ LOL
How do I know my story is really ready?
When the deadline is about to cut my feet out from under me!
It's hell being a perfectionist!
Are you entering the 2016 IWSG Anthology Contest?
Is your story ready?
I can't wait to learn how you know a story is done!
Happy writing in October!
Lovely, Dreamlike Victoria
Fisherman's Wharf
Victoria, British Columbia, Canada
© M. Louise (MacBeath) Barbour/Fundy Blue
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